写信( 40 points)
Write a letter according to the following situation: the Wenchuan earthquake has made this winter extremely difficult for the victims. Write to tell your friend Smith that you are raising money to buy 200 pieces of cotton-padded clothing and some other necessities for the earthquake victims. Ask him to join the charity and show your appreciations for his help.Don’ t forget to tell him your phone number555-5555for further discussion. Please sign your name as Li Ping. (150-200 words)
正确答案：
Dear Smith,
Oct. 26, 2008
I am writing to ask if you could join a charity that I am organizing for the
Wenchuan earthquake victims before the winter approaches.
As you know, the Wenchuan earthquake occurred on Mary 12 this year, claiming
tens of thousands of lives in SichuanProvince and leaving millions of people homeless there. Tents, food, quilts, clothes and other necessities
are still badly needed for the victims in the quake-hit areas.
My friends and I are striving to raise sufficient money to buy 200 pieces
of cotton-padded clothing and some other necessities, which certainly will
be of great help to the victims in the coming winter. The quake has made this
winter on exceptionally trying one for the quake victims. Any donations will be highly appreciated.
If it ’s convenient, please reach me at 555-5555 for further discussion.
Sincerely Yours,
Li Ping
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